27 Feb 2010

New post for your descriptions

Hi again my dear students. I would like you to write your descriptions as a comment to this post, right?
By the way, be careful with verbs (some of you are still using is/are where you need to write the verb have/has got) and pay attention to the use of possessives (make sure you know the person is a he or a she before writing the possessive).

I´ll be waiting for your writings.

P.S. Those of you who have already written their descriptions in the other section do not need to write them again.

8 Feb 2010

mistakes collection by YOU

MISTAKES WHILE WRITING THE COMPOSITION ON `MY BEDROOM’

1. my homeworks, listenning

2. I has got…, the carpets is brown,

3. One of wardrobe there are clothes and other there are…

4. A poster of Ricardo that is my favourite…, there is a lamp that their light is blue because the bulbs are blues.

5. I play with the computer games, the carpets is white and violet, two lamp, I have got also a cd, a lot of a photos, quite a lot of time my bedroom, the wals are white and carpets with.

6. In the evening I listening to music, there is a desks, there are a tv, there are postres on the wall (jeje), the pots of R. Madrid and actors.

7. There are two bed, of my favourites TV series, I have got big BARÇA flag, pistures, homeworl, share it with my brother the walls are, I play videogames are watched tv, like my bedroom it has a problem, my bedroom is big the walls are whrite.

8. I support RM I´ve got pictures, I also cd player and computer, In the evening listen to music and read the books.

9. Tables of night (bedside tables), I have make my bed, wardrove, two bedside table, , and cds, I don´t estayl … on day but, listen the music hardly ever, my beb, my roon, afternon.

10. Important for my, Hear, I study, play the computer games, both are very importants, a dor, my room is welcoming, large wardrobe (sin a), is new and I designed, My mother gave me when…, a very important to me, Never change my room.

11. One bedside tables, homeworks, my bedroom is small, and your colour is blue, and in front of is a wardrobe, on the desk is a computer, my hobbies is listen, a nach ot tupac, the cupboar, I have order.

12. I dont share with…, pictures in the wall, In the room is a bed