Hello there,
here you are the post for you to write a text about a trip that you made in the past. Although the example on page 24 of your students' book has A DISAPPOINTING TRIP as its title, your story does not have to include a disappointing experience.
TIP: Make sure you read the sample you can find on page 24 and also read the two boxes on page 25 which contain the steps and the useful expressions that you may need for a good text.
I look forward to reading them and remember that it is compulsory and part of your mark.
Regards,
Nacho.
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Hello teacher, here's my writing about my trip:
ReplyDeleteA great trip.
Years ago, my friends and I wanted to go to the Cies Islands, but since we were younger could not do it. The summer passed, we went to Vigo, and we got on the first boat that came out to the Cíes Islands make camping there.
When we arrived at our destination, was very sunny day, then took the opportunity to go to the water. The water was really cold then in the beach were very son. The next morning, we went to do a route that reached the lighthouse to a very cloudy day, so was the best choice in green to go to the beach. Climbing the lighthouse looked very beautiful landscapes. Our friends, arriving at the lighthouse gave us good news, that they were promised, and already had her wedding day. Down it was already dark and we went to dinner at our camp.
The latest tomorrow, were playing at the bolleyball Beach, but had such a short time that we could not do anything. About four o'clock in the afternoon we took the boat again to Vigo.
It was a great trip, all we had a very good and we were pleased by the news. We meet again, but when were all married and with children to teach our great trip.
I hope enjoy my trip.
One hug!
Bye!
Hi Lidia and thanks for your writing. Remember you must be careful with translating words without double cheking, as for example with the word 'tomorrow' when you mean 'morning'.
DeleteHi teacher! This is my writing about my terrible trip:
ReplyDeleteTHE WORST TRIP OF MY LIFE
A year ago, my family and I went to Hawaii on summer vacation, it was a trip that we had planned a few years ago, and when my parents were given vacations, without hesitation, we decided to leave.
The trip was two weeks, when we arrived in Hawaii everything was great, the hotel was very big and with a view to the sea, we were seeing the beaches that were around and the markets that were close to the hotel, the weather helped since it was hot and sun all the time, everything seemed to go well, it was the third day there, and it all began when we decided to go to the beach to bathe, we were having fun when Suddenly a shark approached me and bit my leg. There was a lot of blood and I felt a lot of pain, the lifeguards came quickly and took me by ambulance to the hospital, and there they tested me all day and they had to sew my leg.
In the end we had to go home because my leg hurt a lot and I could not walk, so we could not enjoy our family vacation. Hopefully one day we will return.
Thanks for your composition, Paula. Remember you must use more full stops and less commas. It is very rare to find 5 lines without a full stop.
DeleteAlso, check the use of Past Continuous in your text.
Helo Nacho
ReplyDeleteThis is my writing about my trip
The previous summer I and two friends David and alex went to Coruña a weekend we were really looking forward to it and we were happy
We stayed in the house of some friends the o barco
The first day was very short and we visited more places of Coruña as the square of Maria pita Hercules tower and we ate pizza in the beach of Riazor it was very rich
At night we went out party of Pelicano and MY The city was very beautiful and there were many people.
the next day we went to the Domus museum and we saw very interesting things we learned a lot with the tour guide and we walked a lot but it was very good
It was Sunday and that is not our last day our trip finished our wall arrived at the hour and we our friends said goodbye we have been to return to the San Juan
I’m waiting for it !!!!!
Anju, what about commas and full stops???
ReplyDeleteIt is impossible to write a correct text without them.
Moreover, you should review the structure of your sentences.
My trip to Barcelona last year was very exciting for me and my friends we were 4days but we had fun.
ReplyDeleteThe first day on Barcelona we visited the Sagrada familia, plaza España the zoo and Montjuic whit our teachers and a travel guide. It was lot
We slept in the bunglow.
The next day we had breaksfast very morning and we went to port aventura we were very lucky we entered first group. All are big and the attractions are extreme.
Later we took a boat in the port of Barcelona and took of in Tarragona where was our hotel, the days passed quickly.
When I thought was the last day and was buying souvenirs for my family and friends and check in aeroport.
I want to back